考研沖刺高速路：英語(yǔ)寫作范文之三

An examination of the picture immediately reveals that the source of its mood is the air pollution resulting from a huge number of automobiles spread around its surface.

Admittedly, there are various factors contributing to the current worldwide air pollution, but it is undeniable that the exhaust from automobiles is categorized as one of the major elements.

第二句聯(lián)系現(xiàn)實(shí)，綜述人們對(duì)于汽車在空氣污染方面認(rèn)識(shí)的缺乏。
*句子剖析：句子主干是“The majority of people indulge in…,while…”。While forgetting or simply neglecting…相當(dāng)于while they forget or simply neglect…
* indulge in沉浸于；impact on在…的影響
第三句采用正反論證的手法，現(xiàn)提出“造成環(huán)境污染的因素很多”，然后筆鋒一轉(zhuǎn)，用事實(shí)說(shuō)話，汽車尾氣卻是污染源的重中之重。
*句子剖析：該句是并列復(fù)合句。句子主干是there are…, but it is undeniable that …。
*be categorized as 被歸類為。

Firstly, we should apply the most cutting-edge technologies in order to adopt new forms of energy as substitutes for fossil fuels. It should also be guaranteed that the clean energy be inexpensive so that it can be widely accepted.
Besides, there should be attempts to develop possible transportation means, so that citizens can be diverted from dependence on cars.
In short, it is humans’ responsibility to resume clean air for Earth.

第四句提出第二項(xiàng)建議。
*句子剖析：本句是復(fù)合句。主句是There should be attempts…，so that 引導(dǎo)結(jié)果狀語(yǔ)從句。
*divert from轉(zhuǎn)移
第四句綜述上兩個(gè)建議，提出解決問(wèn)題的關(guān)鍵就是人們自己。
*句子剖析：句子主干是It is … to do…。It是句子的形式主語(yǔ)，to do是動(dòng)詞不定式做真正的主語(yǔ)。