發(fā)布時間： 2017年08月07日
身體健康類：
Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should:
1) describe the drawing briefly, 2) explain its intended meaning, and then
3) state your point of view.
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He is coming back from work carrying his briefcase, and he must have stopped by the market on his way, buying vegetables and fish. As is suggested by the picture, he is exercising by waving the briefcase and basket together. |
【第一段是論說文的圖畫描述段?！?br />
第一句是圖畫的總體描述，概括了畫面人物，人物動作及其表情。 *句子剖析:”The picture depicts …”是句子的主干；who引導的從句是修飾man的定語從句。 第二句進一步挖掘圖畫的細節(jié)，進行了情景聯(lián)想。 *句子剖析：逗號連接兩個并列關系的分句。” carrying his briefcase” 和” buying vegetables and fish”分別是各個分句的伴隨狀語。 *must have done…用于肯定句中，表示對過去發(fā)生事情的肯定推測。 第三句歸納圖畫的象征寓意。 *句子剖析：逗號前面是as引導的非限制性定語從句，后半句是句子的主干。by后面接動詞現(xiàn)在分詞，作方式狀語。 |
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The picture is thought-provoking in that it endeavors to convince its audience that we can actually exercise anywhere, as long as we have the awareness of preserving health by exercise. Nowadays a large number of people engage in brainwork, and lack adequate physical movement. Moreover, many of them hold this deep-rooted view that in order to exercise they must squeeze time from their full schedule to go to a gym. Therefore they tend not to exercise simply due to their scanty time. However, the fact is that it is quite easy for everybody to exercise while walking on streets, traveling on buses, and even lying on bed—say, doing yoga. |
【第二段是論說文的意義闡釋段?！?br />
第一句是全段的主題句，揭示了圖畫的象征寓意。 *句子剖析：句子主干是The picture is thought-provoking。In that 引導一個原因狀語從句。其中還包含有that引導的賓語從句和as long as 引導的讓步狀語從句。 *endeavor to do …“努力去做某事” 第二句用事實說明，現(xiàn)如今缺乏體育運動的人很多。 *句子剖析：engage in和lack是兩個并列謂語。 *a large number of 很多； engage in 從事 第三句引出人們普遍持有的一種關于運動的錯誤認識。 *句子剖析：句子主干是many of them hold this view…。That引導的view的同位語從句。 * deep-rooted 根深蒂固的 第四句是由于第三句的認識誤區(qū)所帶來的后果。 *句子剖析：這是個簡單句，due to引導原因狀語。 *tend to do…趨向于做某事； due to 由于 第五句從正面論證：運動無處不在。 *句子剖析：句子主干是the fact is …，that 引導表語從句，其中while是省略了主、謂語的時間狀語從句。 *be easy for … to do...； say,在這里面是一個插入語，表示“比方說” |
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I reckon that the consciousness of maintaining health is significant for both individuals and the whole society. On the individual level, it is vividly evidenced by the man in the picture that his exercise improves his health and mood as well. On the social level, the improvement in quality of life contributes vastly to a harmonious society. |
【第三段是論說文的方法建議段?！?br />
第一句是本段的主題句，表明自己對于以上現(xiàn)象的觀點。 *句子剖析：句子主干是I reckon…。That引導reckon的賓語從句。 *be significant for… 第二句是從個人的角度對主題句進行論證。 *句子剖析：句子主干是It is evidenced that…。It是形式主語，that引導真正的主語從句。 *as well也，還 第三句式從社會的角度對主題句進行論證。 *句子剖析：該句是一個簡單句，主干是the improvement…contribute to… *contribute to 促成； harmonious society和諧社會 |
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