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寫作中語言和句子的常見錯誤:避免粘連句

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粘連句就是指用逗號連接數(shù)個獨立的分句。
例:An old woman lived in the house, she surprised Hansel and Gretel they were eating parts of
her home. (錯)
該句中有3個主語(old woman, she, they),三個動詞(lived, surprised,和were eating),分句可以用句號,
分號(而不是逗號)或使用連接詞。最普通的連接詞是: and, but, so和or。連接代詞有who, which,和that,還有表
示時間連接詞: before, after, when和so on。
上句可以改為:
①An old woman lived in the house. She surprised Hansel and Gretel. They were eating parts of her
home.
②An old woman lived in the house and she surprised Hansel and Gretel and they were eating parts of her house.
③The old woman who lived in the house surprised Hansel and Gretel while they were eating parts of her house.

While和who就使句子的邏輯比②句就清楚明白得多了。


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