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托?？谡Z(yǔ)題目：
Choose one of the forms of the technology in the list and explain how it changes(has great impact on)people's lives in your country?a)airplane b)computer c)television
托?？谡Z(yǔ)參考范文：
I think computer has great impact on people’s lives in my country. First, it has greatly changed the way of searching information. In the past, people looked for information mainly by going to the library to find certain books, which often costs them such a long time to get what they want. But now, you just have to type some key words in search engines to get whatever you want immediately. It is much faster than before. Second, it is very convenient for people to keep in contact with each other, even when living in different countries. It breaks the limitation of distance. For example, my relatives are living in the US now, but we still can chat with each other through FaceTime to share our daily life.
托?？谡Z(yǔ)參考答案：
I think computer has the great impact on people’s lives in my country.
【計(jì)算機(jī)對(duì)我國(guó)人們的生活產(chǎn)生了巨大的影響】
First, it has greatly changed the way of searching information. In the past, people looked for information mainly by going to the library to find certain books, which often costs them such a long time to get what they want. But now, you just have to type some key words on in search engines to get whatever you want immediately. It is much more faster than before.
【它改變了我們搜索信息的方式，段內(nèi)有例子、細(xì)節(jié) 古今對(duì)比，很贊哦!】
Second, it is very convenient for people to keep in contact with each others other, even when living in different countries. It breaks the limitation of distance. For example, my relatives are living in the US now, but we still can chat with each other through FaceTime to share our daily life.
【它讓人們?nèi)菀缀捅舜吮３致?lián)絡(luò)，即使身在異國(guó)他鄉(xiāng)，有例子，很好哦!】
托?？谡Z(yǔ)模板分析：
1.【形容詞最高級(jí)】I think computer has the great impact on people’s lives in my country. 如果后邊是greatest那這是形容詞最高級(jí)，就必須加the，但既然這里不是用最高級(jí)，那就不用加the啦!
[Pt的補(bǔ)充] life這個(gè)詞，如果當(dāng)“人的生活”講，則不可數(shù)，如：everyday life, daily life;但如果當(dāng)“人的一生”講，那就既可以可數(shù)，又可以不可數(shù)，如：in people’s life/ lives都是對(duì)噠!不過(guò)，在寫作中請(qǐng)一定不要忘記life的復(fù)數(shù)形式是不規(guī)則變化，可不是簡(jiǎn)單加s哦~
2.【動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài)】First, it has greatly changed the way of searching information. 原來(lái)的說(shuō)法是忘記了三單，但是即使改成了changes，這個(gè)時(shí)態(tài)還是不夠準(zhǔn)確。其實(shí)是技術(shù)【已經(jīng)】改變了我們搜尋信息的方式——從搜索引擎面世的那一刻開始——這是【過(guò)去發(fā)生的】事情，對(duì)【現(xiàn)在】有影響，用現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)會(huì)更加準(zhǔn)確哦~
[寫作tips] 不過(guò)，像這種it做理由主旨句主語(yǔ)的寫法，可千萬(wàn)不要用到寫作中哦~因?yàn)?，這樣容易指代不清。建議明確寫清楚主語(yǔ)。
3. 【平行結(jié)構(gòu)】原來(lái)的說(shuō)法 In the past, people looked for information mainly by going to the library, finding the certain books and then got what they want. 前面都是by doing sth.的方式狀語(yǔ)在并列：by going, finding 那這個(gè)and后邊也應(yīng)該是doing sth.才對(duì)。但又不能直接說(shuō)：by going, finding and getting因?yàn)椴⒉皇莃y getting what they want，實(shí)際上get what they want是最后的【結(jié)果】，而非過(guò)程中所采取的方式。因此改為：going to the library to find certain books, which often costs them such a long time to get what they want
4.【固定搭配】type some key words on in search engines to 這里請(qǐng)注意哦：type sth. in (= write information on a computer)意思就是“把……鍵入(計(jì)算機(jī))”，介詞是in不是on，可以這樣記憶“把……鍵【入】”嘛，當(dāng)然是in啦!
5.【形容詞比較級(jí)】It is much more faster than before. 這里請(qǐng)大家注意哦，這可不是Eling一個(gè)人的錯(cuò)誤，Pt在寫作小分隊(duì)中就經(jīng)常見到有同學(xué)寫出這樣的句子，much more 形容詞比較級(jí)。這里的much是副詞，可以保留，用來(lái)修飾形容詞比較級(jí);而more是專門和多音節(jié)的形容詞放在一起組成比較級(jí)噠!如more comfortable。這里都已經(jīng)faster了，當(dāng)然不會(huì)再加more啦!
6.【用詞不當(dāng)】Second, it is very convenient for people to keep in contact with each (others) other, even when living in different countries.
1)contact with sb.的意思是是“和某人接觸”，但是無(wú)論是從computer的作用還是Eling后邊的例子來(lái)看，這里想表達(dá)的都不是這個(gè)意思，而應(yīng)該是“和某人保持聯(lián)絡(luò)”。那么，可以用stay/ keep in contact來(lái)表達(dá)。
2)each的意思是就是“每一個(gè)”，所以后邊當(dāng)然要接單數(shù)名詞啦!粗心哦!這也是寫作小分隊(duì)同學(xué)經(jīng)常犯的錯(cuò)誤之一。Pt在此，呼吁大家：應(yīng)該將each other這樣的說(shuō)法牢牢記住，形成條件反射，考場(chǎng)上就不會(huì)錯(cuò)啦!
7.【表達(dá)推薦】It breaks the limitation of distance.也可以說(shuō)It removes the limitation on distance.
8.【the的用法】For example, my relatives are living in the US now, 因?yàn)閁S是United States的縮寫，這種兩個(gè)普通名詞構(gòu)成的專有名詞前面一定要加the，就比如：聯(lián)合國(guó) = the UN (United Nations) 英國(guó) = the UK(United Kingdom)
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