發(fā)布時間: 2016年06月06日
本文為大家準備了托福TPO11綜合寫作范文之人們不愛讀書了,便于考生托福備考。
在新托福綜合寫作中,有的同學語言使用的能力還有一定局限,還要刻意追求句式的復雜化,但這樣的后果就是寫出來的句子個個都有錯,個個都有表達不清。其實用最好的詞表達最多的內容才是最厲害的寫作方式,本文為大家整理了一篇新托福綜合寫作范文,來源于TPO 11。
人們不愛讀書了,尤其是文學類的作品。這樣是不好的嗎?其實很難一概而論。
閱讀材料:
A recent study reveals that people especially young people are reading far less literature – novels, plays, and poems – than they used to. This is troubling because the trend has unfortunate effects for the reading public, for culture in general, and for the future of literature itself.
最近的研究顯示人們,尤其是年輕人不再像以前那樣愛讀想小說、喜劇或者詩歌這類文學作品了。這個現(xiàn)象是令人擔憂的。這是因為這對廣大讀者受眾、對廣義文化以及對于文學本身未來的發(fā)展都是非常不幸的。
While there has been a decline in book reading generally, the decline has been especially sharp for literature. This is unfortunate because nothing else provides the intellectual stimulation that literature does. Literature encourages us to exercise our imaginations, empathize with others, and expand our understanding of language. So, by reading less literature, the reading public is missing out on important benefits.
在書籍閱讀量下降的大氣候下,文學類書籍閱讀量下降更為明顯。這是令人遺憾的,因為在啟迪心智方面,沒有什么可以替代文學作品的作用。文學讓我們發(fā)揮我們的想象力;讓我們同他人心靈相通;讓我們體味語言的魅力。文學閱讀量的下降,讓很多公眾錯失了這些文學的益處。
Unfortunately, missing out on the benefits of literature is not the only problem. What are people reading instead? Consider the prevalence of self-help books on lists of best seller. These are usually superficial poorly written, and intellectually undemanding. Additionally, instead of sitting down with a challenging novel, many persons are now more likely to turn on the television, watch a music video, or read a Web page. Clearly, diverting time previously spent in reading literature to trivial forms of entertainment has lowered the level of culture in general.
不幸的是,公眾失去的不僅僅是文學本身的益處。人們用什么取代閱讀呢?想想暢銷書排行榜上那些頗為流行的自主類圖書吧。這些書往往是內容膚淺、文筆粗糙的。而且,相對于坐在那里饒有興趣地看一部小說,現(xiàn)在的很多人都傾向于看電視節(jié)目、音樂錄影帶或者上網(wǎng)看看網(wǎng)頁。顯然,把那些本該用在閱讀文學作品的時間消耗在瑣碎的娛樂將降低大眾的文化水平。
The trend of reading less literature is all the more regrettable because it is taking place during a period when good literature is being written. There are many talented writers today, but they lack an audience. This fact is bound to lead publishers to invest less in literature and so support fewer serious writers. Thus, the writing as well as the reading of literature is likely to decline because of the poor standards of today’s readers.
當想到這是一個不乏好作品的時候,文學作品閱讀量的減少更顯得令人遺憾了。有很多天才的作家,但是他們卻鮮有讀者。這會導致出版商不再投資于文學作品,而轉而支持那些不夠嚴謹?shù)淖骷摇R蚨?,當今讀者的水平不高導致了文學作品的創(chuàng)作跟閱讀量同時下降。
閱讀部分需要提取的觀點是:
- Main point: 文學作品閱讀量的減少對于讀者、文化和文學的發(fā)展都是有害的
- Sub point 1: 文學作品閱讀量減少對于讀者是有害的
- Sub point 2: 文學作品閱讀量降低文化水平
- Sub point 3: 文學作品閱讀量減少導致文學創(chuàng)作減少
聽力材料:
It is often said that people are reading less literature today than they used to. What should we make of this?
現(xiàn)在常有人說人們不像以前那樣多的閱讀文學作品了。我們應該如何應對呢?
Well first, a book doesn’t have to be literature to be intellectually stimulating. Science writing, history, political analysis and so forth aren’t literature perhaps, but they are often of high quality and these kinds of books can be just as creative and well-written as a novel or a play. They can stimulate the imagination. So don’t assume that someone who isn’t reading literature isn’t reading a good book.
首先,啟迪人只會的不一定必須是文學作品。學科書籍、歷史、政治分析等基本上都不是文學作品,但是它們的質量往往很高,而且它們也想小說和喜劇那樣的充滿創(chuàng)造力和文采。它們也可以啟發(fā)人的想象力。所以不要認為不讀文學作品的人就不讀書。
But let’s say that people aren’t just spending less time with literature, they are also spending less time with books in general. Does that mean that the culture is in decline? No, there’s plenty of culturally valuable material that isn’t written – music and movies, for example. Are people wasting their time when they listen to a brilliant song or watch a good movie? Do these non-literary activities lower cultural standards? Of course not. Culture has changed. In today’s culture, there are many forms of expression available other than novels and poems. And some of these forms speak more directly to contemporary concerns than literature does.
我們假設那些很少讀文學作品的人同時也很少讀各種書。這就意味著文化水平下降嗎?不是的,因為除了寫作之外還有很多文化形式,比如音樂和電影。當人們聆聽美妙的音樂或者看一部好電影的時候,我們能說這是在浪費時間嗎?非文字類的行為會降低文化水平嗎?顯然不是。文化已經不同了。在今天,除了小說和詩歌之外,我們有了更多的形式表達文化。而且,它們中的很多比文學作品更直接地表達當代社會的關注點。
Finally, it’s probably true that there’s less support for literature today than in earlier generation. But don’t be too quick to blame the readers. Sometimes it’s the author’s faults. Let’s be honest. A lot of modern literature is intended to be difficult to understand. Here is not much reason to suppose that earlier generation of readers would have read a lot of today’s literature either.
最后,或許現(xiàn)在對于文學作品的支持不如以前的。但是不要過于草率地去責備讀者。有時,這是作者的問題。說實話,很多當代的文學作品刻意地寫得很難以理解。我們沒理由相信以前的讀者會青睞現(xiàn)在的文學作品。
聽力筆記內容:
Main point: 閱讀部分的說法不成立
Sub point one: 人們雖然讀文學書少,但是可以在其他類型的書籍中獲益
Sub point two: 除了文學作品之外,音樂和電影也是很好的文化傳播方式
Sub point three: 文學作品的支持減少不是因為讀者閱讀減少,而是因為作者的問題。
提示:
- 這篇文章閱讀部分的分論點集中于每段段尾。盡管在獨立寫作中我們不推薦這種寫法,但是這是完全符合essay的寫作要求的。選擇分論點的時候不可以想當然地選擇段首句,而是要仔細閱讀,篩選分析。方法呢,看以前的解析吧。
- 在反駁的過程中,前兩點是直接反駁缺點,陳述說缺點并不存在。而第三點,這是“另尋他因”:文學出版減少的原因不是因為讀者不讀書,而是作者的問題。反駁角度不同,不可以想當然。
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